tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1717221249845341165.post2526160104434943965..comments2023-09-30T06:10:34.381-07:00Comments on Shadow Knows: Not resisting rhymeRobbi N.http://www.blogger.com/profile/04881145195435485238noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1717221249845341165.post-74573197536640967192009-12-11T13:38:59.398-08:002009-12-11T13:38:59.398-08:00So you like the rhyme better? I like the Namaste a...So you like the rhyme better? I like the Namaste and Mazel Tov! I think I'll use that!<br />I went to Denise's class today because she's leaving for England on the 17th and won't be back till after the first of the year, so in anticipation, and also because my hip has been hurting me and Bob's three hour workshop didn't help it at all, I went to her class Weds. and today.Robbi N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04881145195435485238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1717221249845341165.post-25241027836358600742009-12-11T12:38:51.581-08:002009-12-11T12:38:51.581-08:00Robbi,
this one, for me, is the jewel in the crown...Robbi,<br />this one, for me, is the jewel in the crown of your series of poetic gifts.<br />Namaste (and Mazel Tov ;)liznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1717221249845341165.post-39140072678156435122009-12-11T08:38:14.856-08:002009-12-11T08:38:14.856-08:00Thanks Lou. Yes, this is exactly what I wanted to ...Thanks Lou. Yes, this is exactly what I wanted to describe, the eclipse's shadow, multipled many times, formed by the shadows coming through the leaves.Robbi N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04881145195435485238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1717221249845341165.post-91082142541634841112009-12-11T07:37:19.458-08:002009-12-11T07:37:19.458-08:00In the last seven lines, you seem to find words to...In the last seven lines, you seem to find words to say what you mean even within the rhyme.Lounoreply@blogger.com