Thursday, July 16, 2009

Revised story

I've revised "The Tell." Have a look at it.

2 comments:

Lou said...

I can't tell for sure what you revised. The ending might be a bit more explained, though it also seems to me to leave the ending open to a next chapter.

Robbi said...

The opening is very different, as is the organization. There is also much more development of the phony phone calls Terri made, and description of the house she lived in.
You are right that there are more Terri stories to come, though I haven't yet written them.